Commentary Outline

Intro:

In my introduction paragraph I will give background information on the organization and the problem they are trying to resolve. I will also have my thesis statement in this paragraph giving insight on the issue that is occurring on campus, who it impacts, and what is being done to prevent it.

1st Paragraph:

In this in paragraph I will talk about the problem and give background information on the topic. I will talk about the research information pertaining to the subject and the history of the organization.

2nd Paragraph:

I will talk about the people I interviewed, some statistics involving what they said. I will talk about how they feel about this issue. Do they think it’s a problem? I also want to get the opinion of people who disagree with the organization and get their view on it. I will also express my point of view on the topic.

3rd Paragraph:
I will give possible solutions to help or stop the problem. What the Organization is doing to help with this issue and what other alternatives are on campus.

4th Paragraph:
In the conclusion I will restate the problem, the questions it brought up and what is being done about it. I will also Restate my thesis and tie it all together.